I'm trying to describe myself in an essay. But apparently I've lacked with ideas. Could someone check this for me, please? Would anyone of you mind to give my weakness and strength in order to describe myself prominently?
My name is Norbu Gyeltshen. I'm 25years old and I am bachelor. I'm the forth in my nuclear family. I'm much closed with my parents and all of my brothers and sisters. I temporarily live in Bumthang which is situated in the northern part of the Bhutan. In my country, Bumthang is also known as ‘A Land of lord', as this place has a guru Rinpoche’s historical events in eight century. We have several Lhakhangs, monasteries along with secret place of many great lamas, which is now become home for tourist. We also have lots of beautiful mountains which beautifies the surrounding of the Bumthang.
I also love to watch film, listen to music or visiting to new places. Other than that, I love to play football, volley ball, badminton, archery and kuru as well.
I took veterinary science diploma while I was in University. After I graduated, I work as bee keeping assistant focal person in RDC- Research Development Centre at Bumthang just for three months as a temporary. I love my job because it gives me a lot of experiences and shows me the management practices of bee in this Centre and in different countries all around the world. All these experiences are useful to myself and make me realize how I should be successful man by running bee keeping farm privately if I left without job after three months.
However, sometimes I've had a hard time since there are a lot of challenges as well. But even so, I've tried to look in a positive side, because I know dealing with animal (Bee) isn't an easy thing. In order to improve my work performance and myself, I believe there are still many things I have to learn, and need to strive for having a better life in the future.
Once more, hello friends don’t hesitate to mention my weakness and strength below.so that I can be better person for you, myself, society and country.
Thank you in advance for any help.